Wow! totally love the effects!!
This poem really draws me in and holds me!
Very cool to incorporate the two together like that. And, liberty is indeed a very good book!!
I agree.. with a good book and guided by the night radio, the possibilities are endless.
I LOVE this, and adore the magnetic words......very cool. Liberty IS a good book and the late night radio show.
This is absolutely amazing :D loved the innovative style of this poem :Dxoxo
A great visual so appealing and the picture is perfect for your poem....liberty and the feeling of going somewhere...anywhere carefree.
a friend has these magnetic words on her fridge and when you go there one is compelled to leave a message...cool concept for creating a poem.
This is very deep and evocative, especially the haunting way in which you describe the omens. It sounds like she's happy to be at home or in nature. But I think maybe she's being led somewhere tantalizing but dangerous. Away from the burning bush (or maybe toward, depending on the kind to which you're referring). I like the double meaning in the title (both "abroad" and "a broad"). A woman taking the wide path, perhaps, when she knows she should stick to the narrow one. I suppose it depends on what exactly she finds "azure, alive, and charming." If it's the sky, then she's probably safe. If it's a guy, then she might be in for some trouble.
what an awesome analysis of this poem! i love your ideas. :) i enjoyed your interpretations.
You should never wait to go somewhere for tomorrow may be too late.
What a refreshing piece and way of creating....makes me want to join along in that lush field...find that somewhere place
that 'somewhere' is always so enticing...love 'liberty is a good book'....
I like this and its format...ZQ
You can be somewhere by just reading books. I like the title, it's life transit
And she wants to go somewhere... and she should.
A wonderful poem. I like the format it works so well.
Very nicely done indeed.
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