Friday, June 5, 2015

Magnetic Poetry: "Milk Goddess"




Created with the online Magnetic Poetry Kit.  I chose 'the original.'

13 comments:

  1. Ah.. silky white sheen.. moonlit gown.. face of moon.. veil arises.. covering paRt of face.. moon a romantic.. playful one indeed.. set the sky a light.. where
    stars can't measure up..:)

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  2. anyone whispering with summer storms are wonderful. Interesting what you can do with a tool like that.

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  3. I've often been attracted to magnetic poetry - and you prove the point that it can lead to serendipitious and delicious creations...

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  4. Amazing silvery words :) Especially loved "as it smeared the sky/a bare skin dress gown"

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  5. Delicious. I'm quite taken by this version of "the land of milk and honey." To be honest, "milk" makes me think of breastfeeding. So I'm picturing a beautifully natural, nude woman sharing her milk with the moon. She's drawing it down from the sky and mothering it into her arms. How gorgeous is that? Just stunning.

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  6. I love word magnet poems...so cool.

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  7. The smooth language of summer storms sounds wonderful...

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  8. it sounded like a perfect case of seduction :-)

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  9. I love the inference of the milky skin..makes her sound mysterious and tantalising...which i am sure she is

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  10. This is so mesmerizing..! Well penned :D

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  11. Very nice, I like the idea of light as clothing.

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