Ah.. silky white sheen.. moonlit gown.. face of moon.. veil arises.. covering paRt of face.. moon a romantic.. playful one indeed.. set the sky a light.. wherestars can't measure up..:)
anyone whispering with summer storms are wonderful. Interesting what you can do with a tool like that.
I've often been attracted to magnetic poetry - and you prove the point that it can lead to serendipitious and delicious creations...
What a beauty is this!!
Amazing silvery words :) Especially loved "as it smeared the sky/a bare skin dress gown"
Delicious. I'm quite taken by this version of "the land of milk and honey." To be honest, "milk" makes me think of breastfeeding. So I'm picturing a beautifully natural, nude woman sharing her milk with the moon. She's drawing it down from the sky and mothering it into her arms. How gorgeous is that? Just stunning.
I love word magnet poems...so cool.
The smooth language of summer storms sounds wonderful...
Fascinating process and result.
it sounded like a perfect case of seduction :-)
I love the inference of the milky skin..makes her sound mysterious and tantalising...which i am sure she is
This is so mesmerizing..! Well penned :D
Very nice, I like the idea of light as clothing.
Thank you for taking the time to comment, it is so appreciated. Your thoughts and critiques are always welcome! I will be by to visit your blog soon!